Do I need a vary tYPe in my TOP TEN title itself?
NO
I HAVE CHANGED MY TOP TEN TITLE FROM TOP TEN OLD COMPUTERS
TO
TOP TEN RETRO COMPUTERS
BECAUSE
OLD COMPUTERS IMPLY THAT I WILL BE COVERING THE FIRST COMPUTERS EVER MADE. THIS PROGRAMME IS MORE CONCENTRATED ON THE MORE DEVELOPED COMPUTERS. THERE WILL BE ASPECTS OF THE OLD COMPUTERS BUT BY USING THE WORD RETRO IT ALLOWS ME TO BE A LITTLE MORE FLEXIBLE WITH THE SUBJECTS I COVER.
I WAS TOLD TO BE MORE SPECIFIC BUT I CHOSE THIS SUBJECT AS I LIKE EVERYTHING ABOUT RETRO COMPUTERS FROM THEIR COLOUR TO SOUND TO HARD DRIVES. BY BEING MORE SPECIFIC IT CUTS OFF ALOT OF IMAGERY THAT I WOULD LIKE TO USE AND THAT THE TARGET AUDIENCE WOULD LIKE TO SEE.
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